Mirage Source

I will be making a new version of Malitar. The name will be changed and everything and I will be doing a lot more programming since I understand it more. So I have been working on the story and have 3 chapters done. Give criticism but please don't just put generic crap. I need a name for the planet,game and the enemy so ya.

The team so Far
Head Developer: Skillzalot
Head Pixel Artist: Ice Fox
Item Designer: Xanatos

Chapter 1: The Formation

The creation of the world we inhabit was not a
simple task. It was created when many races tried to
flee the great enemy. This enemy has been destroying worlds
for thousands of years and the people of 1 world found a
way to get away.

The mages worked together to form a portal and this
portal was linked to the universe its self. So using this
power and theirs they were able to fashion a world that
all races would be able to live on.

So after the great migration they settled down.
This planet was perfect and nobody was worried about the
enemy. But everyone knew that one day the enemy would return
and unleash his wrath upon them again.



Chapter 2: The Arrival of Gods

There were several gods watching this planet and they
were pleased about how it was progressing but they knew what
was going to happen in the future.

Now there we 7 gods which which created the seven levels
of after life. These seven god descended on the world to tell
the planet of the enemies return. The people were worried
but knew what to do.

20 years after their prediction the portal that they
created opened and there was the enemy. He was even bigger than
before so the gods did what they could and froze him then the
mages went to work separating the enemy into many pieces and
opening portals to hide his pieces.

The plan worked for the gods told them the enemy shall
not return for thousands of years. Peace was once again theirs.

Chapter 3: The Arrival

This planet has been doing very well. The life on
it have been working together for about 200 years. They
have progressed in many ways.

They were having the usual conference but this
conference was interrupted. They looked in the sky only
to see a rock plummeting into the forest. So they sent
their best rogues,assassins and thieves to check it out.

When they returned they reported nothing was there
so life went on.

Comments and criticism appreciated