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Hi guys, Im making a sprite for a game and I tried making a uber cute eyed styled sprite and this where I ended:
[15/6]


I'd appreciate critics, comments and 1/10 rating

<3 Kawainess!

[16/6]

Added clothes and stuff

[22/6]

Made it cuter, and fixed some palette errors

THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!!! YEEEEHAAAWW!!!!

11/10

Wow thats nice what game is it for ? 10/10

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rating: 1/1

I'm here for ya vans ;D

































Seriously though, that looks leet, obv 10/10

1. Kawaii is spelt with 2 i's
2. The guy looks uber pissed off
3. He's very, very, very shiny
4. He looks like he's about 3 or 4 imo.

It's alright altogether, could have made it better if you spent a bit more time on it.
6/10.

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Where shiny? he only has a light spot in its head, the rest are midtones

Well, they may be midtones but he still comes off as shiny for some reason :\

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He has no neck. Why no neck? I noticed that about your sprites. They never have a neck. And yeah, he does look shiny.

8/10

My first impression was very shiny also. I think it's because of the spot on his head. The sprite is uber cute though, haha. My only realy complaint, is that he's too cute, because it looks like his legs are coming straight out of his chest.

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The eyes are too small, and the forehead too big for a chibi-style sprite.

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Add some dots to his forhead and its krillen from DBZ

[spelling may be incorrect, never really watched it]

I just... don't like it.


He's really stocky, like he look gelatinous.
Reminds me of a blob.


Actually, looking again, because of the no-neck/head-shape, he kinda looks like the juggernaut from X-Men.

thats because it chibi style

Meh you guys can bite my face its lush xD

As for shiney... it just looks cartoonish; i dont see anything wrong with it imo.

And as for the comparison above, thats not a chibi sprite your comparing to the juggernaught its a chibi image, get a sprite and you will see.

I added some hair, and I think the head looks a lot better. Also changed a bit the eyes:

Looks pretty kick ass when it's not bald.

I think it was just the amount of flesh everywhere messed with my eyes.

See, I like it now. ^_^

Yeah, that's one cute...er, badass sprite

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vans, the hair and clothes made all the difference!

That is an awesome sprite!

9/10, cause nothings perfect ^_^

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looks great, keep em coming

Had some free time today during math class and used my time to draw up a class for the game, i will make the armor for the sprite later on:


Oh and made the sprite even cuter (check the difference [NEW // OLD]):
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Yeah, i know, you want to hug him.

<3

Who owns the project you're doing this for?

GameBoy